Yesterday it took me most of the day to do a load of dishes
then sweep and mop my kitchen, hall, and bathroom. Not that either is a big
job. Of course, they aren’t. This isn’t a big apartment, and I do live alone.
It’s just that I had to keep stopping to catch my breath and rest a minute or
two. And even with all that resting, by the time I completed those tasks, I was
a bit stressed; I didn’t finish my “to do” list.
Konnie didn’t finish hers either, but well, she rarely does.
And she rarely does because none of her immediate family members recognize
that she has more to do in her day then run people around to all their various
appointments and activities. Let alone that she isn’t goofing off when she’s
sitting at her computer. And I’m not even talking writing.
Konnie spends time doing online surveys, which nets her a
little extra money every year, and she uses quicken to do the family finances,
and all their various bank accounts are online too.
For me, I consider I have a busy day if my “to do” list has
more than four items on it; Konnie would consider that a vacation. I seriously
doubt her “to do” list ever has less than ten items on it. If mine had ten
items on it, I’d included my shopping list. Even when I had a car, and was
driving my sister-in-law around to all her appointments, my “to do” never had
more than five things on it, and I considered it a hectic day if my sister-in-law
had more than one appointment. (She only rarely had two appointments in a
single day.)
Konnie would consider that a lazy day.
Busy is relative. What one person considers busy, another
would consider lazy. Viewpoint and perspective change by who is seeing, or
doing, what is going on. This is especially true in our stories.
Have you ever tried writing a scene from the POV of another
character? It becomes a completely different story because that character will “view”
the events in a way the original character didn’t. I actually have one scene I’ve
written in two different POV’s but that’s because the main character didn’t
notice some things his buddy did.
Viewpoint, and frankly attitude, changes the story. Has
anyone else tried this? Written one scene from two POV’s? Do you see what I
mean?
Happy writing everyone. J
Hi Bonnie, :)
ReplyDeleteAs far as one scene wrote from two different POVs. I was doing that earlier today when I was writing.
I decided my hero needed a friend/sidekick. One of the scenes was wrote in that way. I was wondering if it was clear to my readers.
I wrote:
- Koni -
- Nehrie -
to show the different points of view.
I'm still seeing how well I like it.
You don't have to use both in the final product, but sometimes the different POV shows something maybe even you hadn't noticed. Sometimes it helps. Sometimes you need it. Decide which one you need for the story.
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