Life isn’t always sunshine and roses, and we shouldn’t have
our stories be that way. The weather can sometimes wreak havoc on our lives and
we should be doing the same to our characters. “A Very Special Delivery” by
Linda Goodnight starts with an ice storm bringing the hero and heroine together.
And I recall a story I read years ago that started out with guy driving home in
a huge thunderstorm and spotting a little girl on the roadside in the glow of
his headlights, leading him to finding the little girl’s mother in their
wrecked car. “The Lawman’s Honor” by Linda Goodnight also starts with an accident
in a thunderstorm, though in that one, it’s the heroine rescuing the hero, which
I think is a nice change from the man always doing the rescuing.
I’m not talking about starting your story out with, “It was
a dark and stormy night,” for one thing, that is telling. In the “The Lawman’s
Honor” I know its stormy by the fact that both the hero and the heroine in
their separate vehicles are keeping an eye threatening conditions outside their
car, and by the fact their windshield wipers are having a hard time keeping up
with the deluge. No telling needed, I can visual the storm and that winding
mountain road.
Anyway, weather can, and should play a part in our stories, and
not just weather, but natural disasters. I know there are stories that start
with avalanches, earthquakes, tornados, and blizzards. I’m sure there might
also be some that start with a hurricane or a Nor’easter.
Those stories are about the disaster, about how it affects
the character’s lives, but it is possible to write a story where the storm or
the disaster is just something that happened to bring two people together. I’m
talking something that happened, then the story moves on past that. It is over,
but the story isn’t.
Though I guess if you have an earthquake, or a volcano
erupting, or an avalanche, you need more time to get past those things. (Every
volcano story I’ve ever seen was all about getting away from, surviving, the
devastation.) And I guess that works for action/adventure or disaster type
stories, I just don’t write them.
When I write, I try to consider what time of year it is, and
what the weather might be like, because for one thing, the weather would play a
role in whether or not they need a coat, or an umbrella. The weather plays a
role in whether or not they run from their car to the house or not. It can’t
always be sunny and warm that wouldn’t be realistic.
Weather plays a role in what we do each day, it should also
play a role in your stories.
In my stories, the weather helps set the time of year that
it takes place. In one I have, the bees are buzzing and flowers are in bloom,
in others I guess I’m not as clear on the time of year. And I’ve read some
where they make me feel like the characters never even experience rain, its
always sunny, and they don’t even need jackets, let alone coats.
Maybe that’s just where its set, and the time of year. I
know at least a few of those are set in like California or Florida, so they are
forgiven, mostly, but I do have one which starts out in California, but its
during the rainy season, and involves a series of mudslides. You can’t tell me
that wouldn’t happen, because I started writing that one the year there was a
ton of mudslides all over the state in California.
And let’s face it, there are other natural disasters.
Florida is having problems with sinkholes. Who has sinkholes in their story?
California is known for their earthquakes. Who has earthquakes (even if its
only a minor tremor) in their stories? And California isn’t the only one with
earthquakes, back East they don’t occur very often but out here, they happen, a
lot.
I keep telling myself I should write an earthquake scene
were at least one character isn’t used to earthquakes (only knows about them from
disaster movies on TV) and panics at the first tremor thinking everyone there
with her is going to die.
Its easy for me to visualize, I’ve seen it. It happened to
me in college. We weren’t that close to the epicenter (it was within this
state, but a couple hour’s drive away), and while the house was shaking quite a
bit, nothing was falling down.
Anyway, we need to consider the weather as we write our
stories. Into every life a little rain must fall.
Happy writing everyone! 😊
Good point! Weather affects our lives and activities, so it should also be in our stories, affecting characters' lives and activities.
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